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A Good Place is a coming of age story told by a Louisiana teenager, Mayo Moore. It's about his growing up in western Louisiana during the turbulent years of the Civil War. There are two villages named Westport, both connected in this story. One sits along the mountainous Atlantic coast of Ireland. The other is a rural crossroads deep in the rolling piney woods of Louisiana. Both are good places. Two good places connected by this story. The story of an unlikely couple named Joe and Eliza

A Good Place

A Good Place
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Series: The Westport Series, Book 2
Tag: Recommended Books
Publisher: Creekbank Stories LLC
Publication Year: 2009
Length: Novel
ASIN: 0970523696

A Good Place is a coming of age story told by a Louisiana teenager, Mayo Moore. It's about his growing up in western Louisiana during the turbulent years of the Civil War.

There are two villages named Westport, both connected in this story.
One sits along the mountainous Atlantic coast of Ireland.
The other is a rural crossroads deep in the rolling piney woods of Louisiana.

Both are good places.
Two good places connected by this story.
The story of an unlikely couple named Joe and Eliza

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Part I
The Storm

Chapter 1

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When Daddy shoved me under the table, I knew this wasn’t just any storm.

As the crow flies, our Louisiana log cabin was a hundred miles from the Gulf of Mexico. When this day had quietly begun, no one had any idea a hurricane was churning ashore. However, here we were less than twelve hours later, riding it out under our kitchen table.

Watching Momma trying in vain to keep the lantern lit, a knot of fear as big as a turnip formed in my throat. Giving up on the lantern, she turned to Daddy. “This ain’t no normal thunderstorm. Do you think . . .?”

She couldn’t, or wouldn’t, say the word. In her eyes was something I’d never seen before—raw fear. Her hand trembled as she placed it on my knee. Momma’s obvious alarm moved Daddy into action, and he said the word she’d couldn’t. “Hurricane—this has to be a hurricane.”

Crawling from under the table, he said to her, “Eliza, get the windows covered best you can.” Then he grabbed me. “Mayo, come with me to get the animals in.”

On that August evening in 1862, I was nearly 12 and didn’t have enough sense to realize the danger, so I eagerly joined him.

As soon as we cleared the lee of the house, the wind whipped us, tearing Daddy’s hat right off his head. He ran toward the barn, not even looking back as the lightning outlined his silhouette with each strike. Reaching the building and pulling me inside, he said, “Pen the animals, and throw some hay in their troughs.”

He hurried out, leaving me alone in the building’s growing darkness with only whimpering animals. I found our horse, Dallas, and began stroking his mane. He was snorting, pawing, and shaking as bad as Momma, sensing some kind of evil blowing in that howling wind.

Daddy stuck his head back in, “Hurry, it ain’t safe. Let’s git.” Hunkered down, we ran by our outbuildings, stopping only to bolt the smokehouse and adjacent kitchen.

I cowered under the walkway that connected our kitchen and house, holding onto a post. With my other hand, I covered my head as debris whizzed by.

A flying object struck Daddy square in the back, causing him to stumble. He turned and shouted, “Whoa! Let’s go.” Scampering onto the porch, I heard the first tree crash, causing both the house and my heart to shudder.

As we went through the door, my dog, Bo, brushed straight past me and hunkered down under the table with my mother and sister, Colleen. Momma, who was in the family way, squatted on the dirt floor, still fiddling with the flickering lantern.

“There ain’t no use fooling with that thing,” Daddy said,  “There’s too much wind blowing through the cracks for it to stay lit.”

Holding out the cypress shingle that’d struck him in the back, he knelt by Momma. Frowning and rubbing the whelp on his back, he whispered, “It’s real bad out there.”

“Honey, are—are you all right?” she asked.

Before he could answer, another crashing tree jarred our house and Colleen cried, “Daddy, wh—what’s happening? Is this the war?” Colleen, half my age, had a fear that the ongoing War Between the States was coming to kill us. The noise outside assured her that its cannons had finally reached Western Louisiana.

Another crashing tree, this one even closer, caused her to scream, “It’s a big gun.”

“No, Child, that was a tree falling.” Momma said as she cut her eyes watching Daddy at the window peering out. I was watching him too, and knew one thing for sure, my father would get us through this.

“Eliza, kids, listen to me,” Daddy said in a steady voice. With the howling wind outside, we had to lean in real close, but when he spoke, his words seemed to drown out the storm. “Now, this has gotta be a hurricane. I don’t know how long it’ll last, but we’re gonna be all right ’cause we’re together. We’ll trust the Lord to get us through. This may’ve caught us flat-footed, but we’ll get through it together.”

We’ll get through it together. That was all I wanted to hear, and it was what I needed to hear: Together.

“Daddy, are we gonna blow away?” Colleen asked. I glanced up at our creaking roof, wondering the same thing.

Before he could answer, Momma pulled my sister closer, “Baby, this house was built ‘horse high, bull tough, and pig tight,’ by your daddy and it’ll stand up to anything any storm throws at it.”

Colleen nervously burst out giggling at Momma’s saying, causing us all to laugh in spite of our fear. However, our smiles soon faded as the storm intensified and the rafters lifted and shuddered with every strong gust.

“I feel—I feel so helpless,” Momma said, holding Colleen closer.

Daddy repeated, “We will get through this. Together, we can do it.”

At that moment, I hoped he was right.

Sitting under the table as the wind howled, it was hard to believe this day had started so quietlyLooking back over it, we’d missed several signs—omens of the approaching storm.

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The coming storm’s first omen had occurred earlier that morning when Daddy had met me at the barn for chores. “Listen, Mayo.”

“To what?”

“It’s too quiet—even the crickets have stopped chirping.” Daddy was almost whispering.

Later, as daylight appeared, he’d nodded toward the rising sun. “Chomh deargle le fuil”— Irish for ‘Red as blood.’

“Look at it—where I grew up along the Irish coast, the sailors always said, ‘Red sun at night, sailor’s delight. Red sun at mornin’, sailor take warnin’.”

Shrugging his shoulders, he sniffed the air and added, “Air even smells funny. Gives me the doggone willies.”

As we’d returned to the house for breakfast, I’d noticed Bo under the steps and called him out. He wouldn’t budge, even when I whistled and hollered, “Hunt ‘em up, Bo.”

Another omen missed.

By midday, the morning’s clear weather was long gone—replaced by dark clouds rolling northward on a gusty wind. Darkness came early, seemingly snuffed out by the rising wind, which began driving the rain through the cracks in the walls.

So less than twelve hours after a clear sunrise and promising day, we were huddled under the table as our whole lives were being blown away.

From time to time, Daddy crawled out and peered out the window. Flashes of lightning lit the worry on his face as he whispered, “Well, this ain’t my first storm.”

I knew he was right. He’d come to Louisiana fourteen years ago as a lonely teenager at the end of a long journey, from another land of storms—Ireland.

Here in this area called “No Man’s Land,” he’d grown into a man, met and married my part-Indian mother, and made these piney woods his home. He even named the hill where he built our house “Westport” after his hometown in Ireland, laughingly saying,  “This spot’s the closest thing I’ve seen to a mountain in Louisiana.”

Daddy loved Louisiana’s clear creeks, tall trees, and the freedom it offered—and, until  the day he died, referred to it as “a good place to be.”

Watching him made me wonder if he thought of it as a good place at this moment. Another crash outside jolted the whole house, prompting Momma’s warning, “Joe Moore, get back under here.”

He hadn’t been back under the table ten seconds, when a huge oak tree smashed through the cabin wall right where he’d stood. As wood splintered and contents of the shelves crashed to the floor, we hunkered tighter under the table.

“Lord, have mercy! It’s the end of the world,” Momma said.

Reaching out in the dark, I grasped onto a dripping wet limb, thinking It may not be the end of the world, but it’s sure gonna be a long night.

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